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God

Rating: 4.4


You made this beautiful world,
You gave us the trees and the birds.

You gave us the things we need
And the crops on which we feed.

You gave us the parents so fine,
And friends as well nice.

So to thank you God,
Is a duty of mine.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christian Eliab Ratnam 14 August 2006

Simple yet beautiful... a delight in itself! A pretty poem by Preeti!

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NOTHING LIKE THE CREATIVE YOUNG MIND, ALWAYS AT WORK W/ ITSELF... BEAUTIFUL, SPIRITUAL WRITE, PREETI...FOR ANY AGE...BUT AT 12 or 13... SUPERBLY DONE....AND HOW COULD WE RATE '' GOD'' ANYTHING LESS THAN A PERFECT (10) ! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R.~'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

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Aashish Ameya 04 March 2006

this one is really nice, simple and beautiful...

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