Don'T Go Poem by Jalyn Jones

Don'T Go

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My copious thoughts of darkness and dread,
due to memories of you filling my head.
The more I cry out the more you don't hear.
without you my days are built out of fear.
The screams for help are too much to bear,
they leave me empty and pulling my hair.
My frightening truth is losing you,
this I will never be ready to do.
I'd rather leave first to go Up or go Down.
with solace because you still sleep safe and sound.

Tuesday, April 8, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: fear
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
'Being so fearful of losing someone that you would do whatever to keep them safe is the feeling that I want to live for because I long experience it for only a second.'
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Howard Savage 04 January 2016

true situation when it comes to voicing your feelings. Some people appear to be indifferent. Great writing.

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Piyush Dey 08 April 2014

yeah, we do have such a feeling sometimes. but we should also trust the god. nice poem

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