Zindagi Ke Rang....... Poem by KAVITA SINGH

Zindagi Ke Rang.......

Rating: 4.8

Zindagi ke alag alag rang h
Koi thode me khush h
Koi jada me vi tang h
Koi Apno se ruthe h
Koi begane ban ke chhute h

ye kaisi duniya Dari h
Har taraf paison ki Mara-Mari hai
Koi apna hi Apno ko loot gaya
Koi chahat thi dil me jo shishe ki tarah toot gaya.

Koi roti ko rota hai
Koi paison pe sota hai
Kisi ko ghar me chain nhi
Koi sadkon pe hi sukun se sota hai
Na jane kaisi ye zindagani hai
Har taraf bas Koi na Koi kahani hai....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 19 June 2017

Hi Kavita, I just had to revisit this poem today. I am so happy that you have recovered and are going to favour us with another treat -a new poem. Eagerly waiting... This poem, I had posted a translation in English... But when I read it again, I find new poetry in it; I think I can feel the beats of your lovely heart in it. A lot philosophical: Koi roti ko rota hai Koi paison pe sota hai Kisi ko ghar me chain nhi Koi sadkon pe hi sukun se sota hai..... and, ye kaisi duniya Dari h Har taraf paison ki Mara-Mari hai Koi apna hi Apno ko loot gaya Koi chahat thi dil me jo shishe ki tarah toot gaya. The greed, selfishness, cruelty, apathy we face everyday have been depicted, Most poetic... Wonderful The choice of words, inimitable! Of course, you have got a great cache of vocabulary, and you are able to unearth the right word at the right place... Absolutely fantastic...

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Mithilesh Yadav 28 November 2016

Koi thode me khush h Koi jada me vi tang h Koi Apno se ruthe h Koi begane ban ke chhute h ....... Loved it...... Aye zindagi mujhey kai matlab tere sujhaney lagey hain ..... Jabsey thami hai kalam mene , kai aapney chutney lagen hain ... Najana mein bura hun ya puri duniya buri hai...... Sabko hi kuch bura mein lagney laga hun....

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Kavita Singh 29 November 2016

zindagi ke alag alag rang hai.... :)

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M Asim Nehal 28 November 2016

Zindagi ke rang kai re sathi re....You reminded me this song by Asha Bhosle..10++

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Kavita Singh 28 November 2016

zindagi kabhi yaqi kabhi gumaan hai har kadam pe tera-mera imtahaan hai... zindagi ke rang kai.....

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Abhilasha Bhatt 28 November 2016

An amazing creation.... Sach Yahi hai....aur zindagi k rang pakke taur par beshak yahi hain.....bahut khoobsurat :)

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Kavita Singh 28 November 2016

thank u Abhilasha ji

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