'Your Visit' Poem by Linda Winchell

'Your Visit'

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All week long the sun did shine
until the day you went away.
It clouded up and got so very cold
and then snowed, most all that day.

God seen however to share that time we'd spent
graced with sun and warmth through out our time.
We shopped and talked all day long
with something else popping up in our minds.

We did our girly kind of stuff
we seem to love that when we do.
You lost ten pounds, and I lost five!
on that diet we both did chose!

I drove you to the highway
and as you honked and drove away.
I just kept thinking my dearest girl friend
that we will be together again soon, one day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Gerardino 13 February 2011

i try to read poems like this and for some reason i get kinda lost, its good, , , , , , , , ,

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Linda Winchell

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Chicago Illinois
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