Your Name Poem by Dawn Novus

Your Name

Rating: 5.0


I only caught a lonely glimpse of You

As the stars fell away to adorn the other side of the wide

As they do though, as they are known to do

But the ricochet, leftover light I caught on the earths cycle sigh

So my heart I raised to gratitudes lofty dwelling

And your name I called aloud on the colours of the outward whirlpool

Flute and voice of haunting celtic girl singing of love never ending

Reminding me of a time where golden grapes and their juice are filled in cups overflowing

Forever sowing...

Intoxicates even as the humble strum of some stringed instrument resonates and glides

As the earth turns, as the ocean changes tides

I only glimpsed You when the starlight held You sway

Then the earth did turn for a brighter day.

Sunday, July 8, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 08 July 2018

Dawn, such a lovely poem👍👍👍

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Daniel 13 July 2018

This is such a beautiful AND meaningful Love Poem. It is already ONE OF MY FAVORITES. I don'thavr time to write an appripriate cimment. Ihave tohelp my 89 yer old aunt. But later tiday I wull retrurn tio it. It is breathtakng! ! !

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Kostas Lagos 11 July 2018

Beautiful poem.Really dreamy!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 July 2018

It is a beautiful poem on love and dreams having touching expression and nice collocation. The way of presentation is fantastic. Nice penmanship. I quote......... Flute and voice of haunting celtic girl singing of love never ending Reminding me of a time where golden grapes and their juice are filled in cups overflowing I vote 10 for this poem. Thank u dear madam.

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 July 2018

Celtic girl singing of love never ending! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mahtab Bangalee 08 July 2018

nice lines- And your name I called aloud on the colours of the outward whirlpool Flute and voice of haunting celtic girl singing of love never ending

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Dawn Novus

Dawn Novus

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