Your Mistake Poem by Dan Jensen

Your Mistake

Rating: 4.5


There's a crime,
You put me through,
I ran out of time,
And this I cannot undo.

My mind is gone,
My courage turned away,
And here now by this dawn,
My life it goes away.

I think about you,
A last share of thought,
Not knowing how to get through,
In this hell I am caught.

Down my last tear goes,
A failure the last thought turns,
I know I loved you and I know it shows,
And here now in hell it and I burns.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rodney Epperson 07 July 2007

You painted a very clear picture. It feels like a place I've been into a time or two. Great Job!

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