Your Eyes Poem by Sara Javed
Your Eyes
Your eyes so deep, I drown in them.
They pull me into themselves,
your brown orbs, just like the murky water,
As I struggle to swim up,
but an entity pulls me down,
i thrash, flailing my arms and legs,
Desperate.
Bubbles rise from my throat,
as the murky waters pound against my lungs.
My eyes close, slowly,
and life ebbs away from my fragile body.
Your eyes- they killed me, my love.
I drown into their utmost death,
And who says, love doesn't kill?
Drowning in the brown orbs of lover's eyes and eventually the last line- unique.10
A wonderful Vision.... As I struggle to swim up, but an entity pulls me down, and then the last I drown into their utmost death, And who says, love doesn't kill? .. the intense power of Love...Awesome written...
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4/30/2024 11:53:27 AM # 1.0.0.1119
but an entity pulls me down, i thrash, flailing my arms and legs, Desperate. Bubbles rise from my throat, ......who says love does not kill, .. an allegoric poem. very nicely expatiated.. idea comes for the eyes. thank you very much for this poem. tony