Young Love Poem by GREENWOLFE 1962

Young Love

Rating: 5.0


They hugged and made each other.
They kissed and saw the stars.
They wondered if they did it
On Jupiter and Mars.

They stroked and grazed the meadow
Of each one's sacred place.
They looked and saw the pleasure
Expressed on each one's face.

They held each other gently,
But firmly high and low.
Joyful at discovering
The things they didn't know.

Then, when their senses flourished,
Relieving them of shame;
They found in each such passion,
They trembled, each in flame.

They fell and looked much deeper
Into their loving souls.
They found in each, fine treasures.
And thought, their cherished goals.

They, each one, answered truly.
No lies can thus be told.
They planned, right then to marry;
Before their love turned cold.

As young love has such pleasures,
And not much grief or pain;
No wonder then, young lovers,
Repeat them once again.

The mistakes garnered falsely
From passion's sizzling fire.
But come to see much later,
Such loves may soon expire.

It ever was, as stated.
A passions overflow,
That makes young love look foolish
In retrospective glow.

But while, it's then, in season;
It cannot be ignored.
Young Love is living's treasured gift
Of joys yet unexplored.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sameer Ahmed 30 June 2009

A true depiction of young love in its real essence which I think can even be blind and can cause one a severe pain if the path of hurriedness is to be followed. Yet the energy and passion involved in young love is really worth enjoyable.....

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Cristy Upshaw 26 May 2009

ahh to be young and in love, what stunning display of such elegance you have portrayed in your words. i do remember you talking about this one and believe i read it elsewhere, but it is still a touching and heartfelt piece.

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it starts with that sweet innocence..admiration...sharing their cravings...even if the lovers split...that love is definitely true...a truth told ina subtlr way

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Such sweet innocence when we first explore Love passionate explosion...A ten from me.I gave you a ten on THE UNIVERSE.

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