You Tell Me Poem by samantha brooks

You Tell Me



You tell me to get my head out of the clouds,
To pay attention to now.

You tell me I'm self centered
And I ask you how.

You say I'm stupid and have no future
I just walk away.

Now you tell me not to go
Like I'd put up with you for another day.

Well sorry my love, my patience is worn thin.

Ha.

I guess this is the part,
Where I say I win.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandhya S N 20 November 2009

shardp message in very few lines congrats and regards sandhya

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Ying Escalona 20 November 2009

blow those clouds instead...nice lines...

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 19 November 2009

Small message in poetic lines....good

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Joseph Stotz 19 November 2009

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