You Never Thought Poem by gul naz

You Never Thought

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The place where once you parted with me,

I am still standing there with hands stretched.

Ages have been passed but you never looked back.

You promised me you will return one day;

You promised me you will be back by spring.

Springs have been passed:

Of youth, of love, and of life too.

I am no more a spring flower now,

But I am still here waiting for you.

I didn’t stir,

My eyes never closed,

The pupil of my eyes is fixed on the spot,

From where you once gone leaving me alone.

You fired the flame in my little heart,

I never allowed the flame to die,

But the flame so kindled that I am now ashes.

Between the ashes and woods of pine-

The place where once you left me alone-

Come and blow my ashes away,

So I can be free forever now.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shirley Woods 06 July 2010

Hi there, What a wonderful poem. It is one of those you read that stick in your mind - the whole poem is breathtaking, the sheer implacability of human nature is expressed in 'I didn't stir.' Also I love the line 'The flame so kindled that I am now ashes.' Thank you and 10+

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