You Just Cant Seem To Win Poem by Payyton Egerstaffer

You Just Cant Seem To Win



When you have all the friends
And you have all the grades
The only thing left to see is what's behind the lens
When you peel off whats left of the shades

Your in your group
And you having a good time
Your getting the scoop
And your faking every line

Your hurting so much
But you hide it very well
Your cringe at every touch
When you retreat into your shell

You can try to hide
And you can try to fit in
But it just seems every time you've tried
You just cant seem to win

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Matthew Harrison 19 August 2009

Wonderful execution. Your build to the poems namesake was flawless. Good momentum. Good flow. Great job.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Payyton Egerstaffer

Payyton Egerstaffer

Fort Polk, Louisiana
Close
Error Success