You Poem by Pratikshya Sedhain

You

Rating: 5.0


Like numerous twinkling stars in the sky
You also love to sing Twinkle! Twinkle!
Like the single moon shining in the sky
You are the only one who shines in my heart

Like every beat of the heart inside me
You also lead the life in a pace
Like my two eyes watching the whole world
You are the one who shows me my path

Unlike the dark sky staring and scaring me
You spray the light and fill me with joy
Unlike the ghost thrilling me at night
You play the music and let me enjoy

Unlike the shivering cold wind of the winter
You bring warmth and make me feel safe
Unlike the crackling noise of door in winter
You bring peace and let me stay safe

Like the angel bringing joy in my dream
You bring me comfort in my reality
With the blessings including love and togetherness
You changed the way I used to live my own life...

Monday, April 9, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: compassion,love and dreams,love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2018

This is a beautiful poem on love and life having touching expression and nice dictions. You is a word which is most important in this love poem based on metaphor. It may be quoted......... Like the angel bringing joy in my dream You bring me comfort in my reality With the blessings including love and togetherness You changed the way I used to live my own life... Thanks for sharing.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2018

Like numerous twinkling stars in the sky love amazingly twinkles in heart and mind. In reality or dream love brings comfort. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned...10

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