You Poem by Dawn Novus

You

Rating: 5.0


I looked all over for you
I looked all over for you
I broke my heart into
For you..

I dredged the ocean under
I pledged the lightning's thunder
And did it all because of you
You..

The mountains shook
The rivers roared
The dark sea sunk into the shore
And here I stand in front of you
You..

Your colour shines like perfect
Your soul my sacred heart fit
And God knows that I deserved you
You..

My coursing veins flow love red
I tie it with your heart thread
And there I'll live and die in you
You.

Tuesday, November 7, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dawn Novus 07 November 2017

For you. Knocking on the door of love.

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Akhtar Jawad 10 April 2018

And God knows that I deserved you. Liked the poets confidence in himself.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 March 2018

This is a fascinating poem! You have expressed your love amazingly! Very powerful imagination! I like this kind of poems where love is deeply articulated! Loved reading it. I vote this beautiful poem with a 10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 November 2017

It is a beautiful poem on love and romance having stunning expression with nice diction. Purely deep. I quote.. My coursing veins flow love red I tie it with your heart thread And there I'll live and die in you You. Thanks.

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Genova Maaa 11 November 2017

I tie it with your heart thread And there I'll live and die in you You.... a great romantic and love poem...... what all we do to be with our love...... expressed very very well here in this poem- thank ui dear poetess.

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 November 2017

And here i stand in front of you! ! Lovely poem! Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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