You Poem by Sawan Dhyani

You

Rating: 5.0


Living with this feeling of love & guilt,
Reconsidered my dreams, how were they built?
Opened my eyed, gotta decide you,
Cuz I'm unable to see anything beside you.

A world full of people pretending to care,
I just needed a moment to surrender, to share,
And now I heard that they follow you,
But I must dare, even to call you.

Tell me how does it feel to live in my heart?
And does it cheer you up when you tear it apart?
Shake my nerves and the may tell you,
What I feel and that I smell you.

But maybe now, its not in my hand,
And maybe my dreams are made of pillars of sand,
Wherever I go, I think about you,
Whatever I think, its all about you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sawan Dhyani 19 August 2012

Thank you Shivani. Thanks a ton.

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Sawan Dhyani 19 August 2012

Hey, thank you Nilakshi. And yeah I loved her a lot.

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Shivani Gupta 18 August 2012

Its so touching, love this one..

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Neela Nath Das 17 August 2012

So nice Sawan.I'm just blown away. Lovely. The feelings of loss and the profound love for your lady love are floating in this poem.

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