Y Whispered Poem by Maria Mitea

Y Whispered

Rating: 5.0


speak to me like the sea, and
i did speak to you like the sea, but
when i opened my eyes and looked better
you were not there anymore

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Venkat Easwaran 01 January 2023

Gone with the waves. Nice expression, Maria

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Maria Mitea 01 January 2023

yes, Kesav, : ) or maybe it was just the whisper as any whisper can live in our desire/imagination/fantezie..thank you for viziting&rwriting back. i deeply appreciateitt!

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 02 January 2023

Glad you liked my feedback

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Rob Lamberton 29 February 2024

The ocean is like that!

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Nosheen Irfan 06 January 2023

That's the dilemma of every relationship. We never know when someone will leave. A beautifully poignant ink that everyone can relate to.

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M. Asim Nehal 03 January 2023

Mystery unsolved. I liked the theme. Happy New Year

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 02 January 2023

superb poetic short natural expression

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Richard Wlodarski 02 January 2023

Whisper or not, this is an AMAZING poem. True to your form. Welcome back, Marie. Hope you had a great Christmas. Wishing you the very best in 2023!

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