(world Peace) Poem by Kyle.J Carruthers

(world Peace)

Rating: 2.7


When the time is right and everyone’s the same

Our world will be perfect with no one left to blame

Rage and hate will be a torn up page

Love and peace will rise above

Death will be for the old who lived to love and be sent above


People will be united all across the globe

Everyone will as one loving, sharing, and peacefully caring

And when no bombs fly through the sky and other work is done

Come and see the peace but don’t ask why

Each and every one of us together forever as one

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anong All 06 June 2004

(World Peace) ....To be honest.., this poem of yours'.., is very scary. The message, in which.., I did come upon.., Right off the bat, the title is trapped. Not, only once.., but twice. The third time.., WORLD PEACE.., felt more at ease.., WORLD.., seemed to be crying out for help. PEACE.., seemed to call furth. Your poem is indeed.., interesting. I hope.., the overall, message has goodness within.

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Kyle.J Carruthers

Kyle.J Carruthers

Orillia, Ontario, Canada
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