…within And Beyond The Hero’s Journey … Poem by Antonio Liao

…within And Beyond The Hero’s Journey …

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cascading water falls, embraces the high cliff,
where the echo of melodic rock conquer the paddle sand
in the sunset of a magnificent blow of the wind,
beneath the murmuring pebble of thousand battled ambiance
of natural wonders

await dear heart of the star, where the galaxy
of the Milky Way, wish to play on the twilight shine
amongst the riding rainbow of the stream that flows in
the midst of the dazzling night

come our respected guest and down the islets for the isles,
welcome your stay; the idyllic moment will be the most
memorable awesome peep of your eyes, a wholesome
pleasure of sweet dream of reality come true

genuine heart brings your wisdom to find the treasure
past of your life; like a flying eagle who wish to nestle its
prey with tender touch and a loving spirit of friendship
in the middle of alluring gift of happiness and enjoy deep
inside the passionate heart of you’re lasting sincerity
of love

welcome the journey of sensible pleasure and capture
the unlocking spirit of wings; of the given gift of paradise,
the silent bloom of the sand of Zamboangan flaps soil of
the Subanon land, a haven of all, who join the sacredness
moving spirited people of the land of the Lumad-free

feel and touch the mystic land of the riding pleasure of
the sand ……

“a poem…a tribute to the promise land of my birth,
Zamboanga del Norte,
Philippines”

Aon

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lady Grace 25 January 2010

this piece is so nice and charming representing zamboanga city ''the place of beautiful flowers'' as the center of hero's journey..words written here are adorable and smart.....i finally say, this is so beautiful tony, promise...

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Rinki Nandy 22 January 2010

one must be hero being around a beautiful place like this. your description brought the place to life, lovely 10++++

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 January 2010

cascading water falls, embraces the high cliff, where the echo of melodic rock conquer the paddle sand in the sunset of a magnificent blow of the wind, beneath the murmuring pebble of thousand battled ambiance of natural wonders...................it is naturalwonders and towitness such objectis really pleasing to the eyes..loveply poemt to read.....10 read mine..woman's womb

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Ric Bastasa 11 January 2010

nice images for the Philippines and its 7,000 islands. good work tony.

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