Winter Sunset Poem by Raj Arumugam

Winter Sunset

Rating: 5.0


the morning started with fog
and now late, a dark sky hangs over Brisbane;
in the West a child has scrawled
untidy clouds
over the sun
and the remaining pieces of silver
are eaten like potato chips
by the night

the winter night
takes the sun in her ample breasts

the moon looks helpless on the opposite side

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Terry Craddock 19 June 2016

'and the remaining pieces of silver are eaten like potato chips by the night the winter night takes the sun in her ample breasts the moon looks helpless on the opposite side' so wonderfully unique, masterful

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Ashraful Musaddeq 05 June 2009

Sweet and cute poem on winter sunset...10+++

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