Why* Poem by Rehan Hyder

Why*

Rating: 5.0


Mind's eager fingers
lament the slippery parting
of one logic just one right word
that covers the hapless nudity
of 'why do I love thee still'


* Born on Sarah's page

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Every single word skilfully employed. t x

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Karen Delta 26 May 2008

if love is true, it is forever, maybe? does moving on mean stop loving? not necessarily.. hugs x

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 04 September 2009

you can't explain, and you will not! Love is unfathomable. the most ENIGMATIC feeling.

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Marieta Maglas 20 June 2009

that's the mystery of love.Well written poem...10+++

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Christine Austin Cole 25 February 2009

...just one right word that covers the hapless nudity of 'why do I love thee still' Ah, that's fabulous. '... the hapless nudity of 'why do I love thee still' ' is echoing through my head over and over and over and each time, without hesitation, my mind replies with 'Damn - that's... perfect'. So much said in those ten words. That sort of poetic clarity is a blessing and a curse, really. Christine

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Ashraful Musaddeq 07 September 2008

A nice observation with love. I enjoyed and added 10.

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Vilma Xelin 12 August 2008

love has no sense... no logic, no rules... love is power, and always make with us, whatever he wants... there is no logic in the right word, is just the sense that love gives to that word, that makes it special.... is the feeling, the moment, the time... that special one... and we fall like slaves for ever... with out sense, no logic, nothing sain... thanks for sharing friend, u make me fly to this special moment...

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