Whole Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Whole

Rating: 5.0


It's one of those days Lord, I feel
so alone. Everything comes out wrong,
even my look, even my tone. Try to keep
smiling, but everything seems like that
sad song, that just keeps hitting home.
I turn around and wonder where, the time
goes. As I watch the night stars and skies
close. And wonder if you could, ever love
me whole.

Saturday, September 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: god
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 30 January 2022

love me whole......passionate expression that creates ripples! Metaphysical content.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 September 2018

An emotional write on God so nicely and touchingly executed. Beautiful poem.

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Rebecca Navarre 15 September 2018

Thank you! .. Kumarmani, For such beautifully thoughtful and kind replies! .. Your poetry paints such beautiful imagery to mind, with depths so beautiful and spirit, that's hard hard find! .. May the love in your heart for God, family, and nature always shine! .. God bless! ..

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Susan Williams 10 September 2018

His answer is... Yes, my child, and I already love the whole Rebecca Very worthwhile write here!

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Rebecca Navarre 11 September 2018

Thank you! .. Susan, For such beautiful heart! .. Your poetry so strong and beautiful like the power of the waves, and majesticness displayed, sweeps the heart away! .. Love you to dear! .. Ever so many blessings! .. :)

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Rini Shibu 01 September 2018

Lovely piece about God's love on a lonely soul

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Rebecca Navarre 04 September 2018

Thank you! .. Rini, For your beautifully kind response! .. Your poetry holds such beauty and emotion, that flows to the readers soul! .. God bless! ..

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Aqua Flower 01 September 2018

God will always love us whole even when we are broken, He holds the pieces of us and can see us whole! This is a very emotional write that describes feeling hopeless.

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Rebecca Navarre 04 September 2018

Thank you! .. Aqua flower, For such a very kind and beautiful reply! .. Your poetry is ever so moving, with such heart and light you brings others such delight! .. Ever so many blessings! ..

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