It's one of those days Lord, I feel
so alone. Everything comes out wrong,
even my look, even my tone. Try to keep
smiling, but everything seems like that
sad song, that just keeps hitting home.
I turn around and wonder where, the time
goes. As I watch the night stars and skies
close. And wonder if you could, ever love
me whole.
An emotional write on God so nicely and touchingly executed. Beautiful poem.
Thank you! .. Kumarmani, For such beautifully thoughtful and kind replies! .. Your poetry paints such beautiful imagery to mind, with depths so beautiful and spirit, that's hard hard find! .. May the love in your heart for God, family, and nature always shine! .. God bless! ..
His answer is... Yes, my child, and I already love the whole Rebecca Very worthwhile write here!
Thank you! .. Susan, For such beautiful heart! .. Your poetry so strong and beautiful like the power of the waves, and majesticness displayed, sweeps the heart away! .. Love you to dear! .. Ever so many blessings! .. :)
Thank you! .. Rini, For your beautifully kind response! .. Your poetry holds such beauty and emotion, that flows to the readers soul! .. God bless! ..
God will always love us whole even when we are broken, He holds the pieces of us and can see us whole! This is a very emotional write that describes feeling hopeless.
Thank you! .. Aqua flower, For such a very kind and beautiful reply! .. Your poetry is ever so moving, with such heart and light you brings others such delight! .. Ever so many blessings! ..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
love me whole......passionate expression that creates ripples! Metaphysical content.