Who Am I? Poem by Sahar Sahar

Who Am I?

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I am your shadow,
If you want to know,
and......so,
Like a star at noon,
Loses himself,
And drops of water,
Loses in river,
When it pours,
So,
I am lost in your love,
and I am yours,
Even, ..... if you are not mine.
I must shine,
In your eyes,
And become vibrant, ,
Like a word,
On your lips,
As I know,
Who am i.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 January 2010

So, I am lost in your love, and I am yours, Even, ..... if you are not mine. I must shine, In your eyes, ...............................definitely u must be in my eyes what an intense love dear... lovely crafted poem and i liked it most.........10 read mine...lovely life.... i miss

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Dr.subhendu Kar 09 December 2009

Like a star at noon, Looses himself, And drops of water, Looses in river, When it pours, ..................... as spumes of white loses in blue dream seems to dissipates from illusion ocean drinking cup of rays from moon heart yet riffles by enshrinig grace of love, wonderful imagery of love as when paited by colors of rainbow, yet ingeniously wrought with metaphors,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Shakir Gumnam 08 December 2009

Self awareness is a great virtue, you start the poem with a question mark but end it with a sign of exclamation, very good poem! 10

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Saadat Tahir 26 November 2009

sahar simply awesome and beautiful poetry... yes the truth in loves embrace...did a greatb poem... rghtly be proud of it cheers and ten

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