Whisper Of Love Poem by Vian Sabri
Whisper Of Love
Heart and soul love you baby
You ever don't feel my sorrow
Deep Pain forbid eyelids sleep
Shine star fade and shine away
Fancy whisper chest all the night
Your Letter name nest in my heart
Never feel my love, ever
Your eyes full sleep, baby
Still not in my hand, baby
Want to hug you and dance
To wrap my arms around you
To feel you heart beat
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True, love is bitter battle
Tear, mind, heart, sole
No winner, all tiring, effort
Reunion stick all moment
As an infant to milk breast
but, baby if you don't know
Death is biggest love mercy
Bitter battle! ! With the muse of love and pain. Thanks for sharing.
Indeed, love could be a bitter battle for some people - a distress and heartache in the bliss of love. A beautiful love poem, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. A lovely piece indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
whisper of love is so nice that i feel it got my heart dear, good
very nice dear vian, whisper of love is faraway nice than the your first poem
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 8:00:42 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Nice job however my suggestion is try to use metaphors and imagery in your poetry. Moreover go for different forms of poetry it will facilitate your expression of deepest thoughts and feelings