Whirlpool Poem by David Harris

Whirlpool

Rating: 5.0


Swirling round and round,
dragging everything down.
Like circles in the mind,
when love puts you in a spin,
turning your world around and around.
Hearts beat quicker,
sucking you in like a whirlpool.
No safe haven there,
once you’re caught within its snare,
not even cupids welcome there,
in loves whirlpool.


20 April 2007

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew mark Wilkinson 27 May 2007

Never Heard Love Describe has a whirlpool before... Yes it can be a wild ride of emotions Up so high and back down you go... More like a Rollercoaster ride to my mind.. David.. But what a ride my friend.. What a ride..10

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