While You Retreat Into Yourself Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

While You Retreat Into Yourself

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while you retreat into yourself,
i make some coffee, then put on
some music, and wait for your
return, still i find love in these
sad moments, and a lover whos
always afraid of being alone,

what did your dad do to you,
and is this why you keep a
night light on, even after all
these years, you cry and slowly
break, then fade into a small space.

then you call my name, and i hold
you tight..for in these arms you are
always safe.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Gorgeous work, David...Mellifluous sructure...good choice of employed language...this i like a lot...Solid crafting, my friend. ~ F.J.R. ~

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Duncan Wyllie 19 March 2007

This is just another reason why, I have come to read your works, this is another gem David Wonderful words of support and wisdom Love duncan x

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