{when You Wake} Poem by Lillian Jamison

{when You Wake}

Rating: 3.3


I want you to see this
Upon your waking, my sweetest love
I miss your face
Your arms around me
I hold your love
Wrapped ever tightly around my heart
I feel your hands upon me
I recall your scent of sensuality

I hear your voice
Telling me you need me so
So upon your waking my sweetest love
This I wanted you to know
You make my heart beat
My life you complete
My soul you own
Eternally you are my man

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 05 October 2007

most smoochingly scintillating epithet that wakes someone to feel within..the need of some one........most exqusite version of love, , , well penned

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 02 October 2007

Lucky Guy, indeed....Beautiful versing for anytime of the day...but so amorous to awaken to for certain...Excellent Penning, Ms. Belle! FjR

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Thad Wilk 02 October 2007

Excellent Lillian! ! Lucky guy! (10) ! !

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