When You'Re With Me Poem by Geovanni Leaño

When You'Re With Me



There are many times you pardon,
which i think isn't necessary,
There are times i think i should move on,
but i think it won't help me,
There are times that you always smile,
There are times that you hold back,
There are times that you deny,
There are times that you're sorry,
There are times that you just endure,
There are times that you try,
There are times you feel like you cant make mistakes,
but i hope you'll realize this:
that when you're with me,
you dont need to be that perfect soul,
'coz deep within,
my love carved you perfectly.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Goge 24 April 2008

Geovanni, Sincerely write and it is touching, I think It good start for beginning poets... I wish good luck mine the young friend... Warmest regards, Tsira

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Arthel Tagnipez 21 March 2008

beautiful.nice.ano pa.basta maganda siya. Ü

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