David duckworth

Rookie (01-16-94 / Morganton, NC)

When You'Re Sick - Poem by David duckworth

When your sick I swear you still look amazing.
When your sick I know that noodles you r craving.
Ur still happy when your sick and never degrading.
So im gonna doctor you up and work on my painting.

I'll start with your toes, you have the cutest little toes.
Then I'll paint your finger nails. And get some on your nose.
You'll tell me they're good and I'll turn the color of a rose.
And anything you ask of me I'll say "I suppose".

I'll hold you and kiss you who cares if I get sick.
Making you feel better is all that matters and I can do it so quick.
If it would make you feel better I'd let you hit me with a stick.
But only for a bit. Because you hit hard an it'll hurt like sh**

Comments about When You'Re Sick by David duckworth

  • Gold Star - 30,378 Points * Sunprincess * (11/29/2012 7:56:00 PM)

    laughing out loud..this is a a really cool poem..enjoyed. :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 29, 2012

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