When The One You Love Falls Poem by Marilee Morley

When The One You Love Falls

Rating: 5.0


When the one you love falls
It is neither good or bad
But is rather the one you love okay
And needs medical attention

But the one you love may refuse it
In your best thoughts and interest
Is it right to help your loved one up
Or is it right to let them fall

If you love that one person
And the one person loves you back
It is in best interest to help
Because their will be a time

When your on the edge of falling
And the one person will help
If the one person loves you
The same as you do the one person


(07/03/11)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 03 July 2011

Beautiful poem written well with nice texture and imagery. I liked and rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4.

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