When The Brightest And Biggest Star Departs Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

The Sun is ready to depart/And rest to give chance to night/When it finally sets above the horizon.......Candid poetic expression! A very commendable piece of poetry! Top score.

A most beautiful poem written by a world class poetess on top of her game. For Rose Marie Juan Austin is poetess who knows how to weave poems of pure gold for one and all that shine. A superb and enchanting poem Rose Marie,10++ and added to my poems of sheer class display cabinet. Take care and I wish you well and the loved ones around you.

A most beautiful and poetically sincere, inspired description of a Sunset. Like finely woven lace images and feelings find their worded grace. A brilliant gem!

A nice poem on a hopeful tomorrow. Marie Juan Austin is on her climax.

This short poem speaks of the selfless life of Sun. How he spends his day showering his benevolence (poet says “gold”) on everything. Earth, and of course man, is just one such beneficiary. Then he leaves the scene for the Night-Star to take over. And how is Sun rewarded for his selfless act? The entire universe turns into an ocean of colours to bid him adieu. Naturally. Lovely poem.

Golden beams of love and life! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Yes, every sunset is hope for tomorrow to dawn

Amazing masterpiece of work by a great poet always deserves 10++ and on to the Fav List Well done and thanks for sharing

After spreading her gold for the day In so many directions and ways Rose Marie Juan Austin is ready to depart And rest to give chance to night When she is finally sets on the top list of poets her golden beams create magical means of love and peace Inspiring us to look forward to the beauty of life .

Inspiring us to look forward to A beautiful tomorrow........beautifully crafted the star departs the sun comes the sun departs the moon comes the dark night departs the enlightened day comes the present departs the future comes oh; never come the past but every present greets the every present with the would be FORM like the would be SPOUSE......