When The Brain & Heart Disagree Poem by chanda panda

When The Brain & Heart Disagree

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When the brain & heart disagree
One wants to do one thing
The other another
Seems to me the brain often wants to run
Get out before things get tough
It seeks to protect
In a way of fleeing

The heart...
Oh, the heart wants to stay
It knows where the safety really is
Where the happiness is
Or will be, once the storms have passed
So it’s content to stay
Waiting for the healing calm

Sometimes it’s troublesome
Deciding what to do...
When the brain & heart disagree

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chanda Panda 06 November 2004

Thanks foryour comments and kind words. I changed it. :)

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Tom Foster 05 November 2004

Cute little poem but so right on About the only thing I wold like to see change is the removal of the second 'thing' 'When the brain & heart disagree One wants to do one thing The other another thing' 'When the brain & heart disagree One wants to do one thing The other another ' Just my opinion though so take it for what it's worth Anyway, Liked it Tom

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