When My Earthly Body Dies- - A Tercet Poem by Susan Williams
When My Earthly Body Dies- - A Tercet
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When my earthly body dies
I hope my soul unchained flies
flies with God's sparrows into the sunrise
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roams with the cheetah and roars with the grizzly
and when I have seen on earth all that eyes may see
I hope I flee into eternity.
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~©2017 Susan Williams.
I hope, I flee into eternity.... this poem reaches the top at this point. A beautiful poem......5 stars.
Suresh- - thank you for reading and feeling the poem fly to eternity on butterfly wings!
Ever such beautiful spirit, that soars within this one! .. Long may you roar, and sing! .. :) Thank you again ever so much for sharing such magnificent thoughts and beauty! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
Rebecca, your comments are so refreshing and invigorating- -we need to bottle them! ! ! ! ! Thank you, dear friend!
This poem has a special attraction that I wanted to visit it for second time. It is a great philosophical poem on life and death. Though this poem is in concise yet it expresses much about soul. Thanks again dear madam.
What a pleasing thing to hear- -the best honor a writer can get is people wanting to reread their works! ! ! Thank you so much, kind sir! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Your Pantheistic view resounds, Universal union, Earth, its creatures, your crown Mysterious beauty does surround, Souls like yours, celestial bound. Very moving poem, Strong inner flow, The whole so very touching, Hearts overflow. Congratulations, dear Susan, another gem!
Thank you Sandra for the comment poem- -they are such a delight- -rather as uplifting as getting a bouquet of daisies! ! ! there will have to be another type of poem entered in the wikipedia for this - -should call it the Feldman Comment Poem... Thank you, kiddo
My bouquet to you Would be of roses, Queen of flowers, just like you But you're also Queen of feelings, And deep friendships, kindness too.