Wheather Forecast (Haiku) Poem by Ludovik Celaj

Wheather Forecast (Haiku)



One skyscraper montain
in wihte and blue crown mooving
grey and brown becoming.

Nov.30.2012

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November 30.2012
Ludovik CelajNEW424 days >*
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nice thought

Deepak Kumar PattanayakNEW59 days agonice thought
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good apart from the spelling

Simon ElliottNEW423 days agoget spell check brov
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nice

Jon OtanoNEW424 days agonot bad
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good

Gary J HallNEW424 days agobut you can do better
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Hot-M.E Madhe/Shkoder, Albania
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