What If? Poem by Alf Hutchison
What If?
GAL 5: 22 But the fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, long-suffering, kindness, goodness, faithfulness,
What if?
What if we were incapable of love?
Or to see the beauty in a snow white dove,
What if this life simply held no joy,
No playful shenanigans of a baby boy,
What if in this life we had no peace?
Just a greed to own the Golden Fleece;
What if mankind harbored only blindness,
No long-suffering and zero kindness;
What if we just lived and died,
Were never truthful, but always lied.
What if in this life there was no hope,
Just a scaffolding and hangman’s rope
What if we possessed no goodness;
No faithfulness nor loving-kindness
What if we spent our lives in fears
Of addicts, drunks and sexual queers,
What if we had lived in the time of Lott,
God destroyed Gomorrah, but mankind forgot.
What if I tell you “Its now taking place,
This world degenerates at diabolical pace”
What if Sodom and Gomorrah returns as ‘old sod’,
Again man will witness… the awesome wrath of God! ! !
Thanks Alf, this is a brilliantly written thought provoking piece in true Alf-style...Undoubtedly a 10
I admire so much the way this poem is so easy to read, and also has brilliant images that leads the reader straight down to the bottom, without being bored one little bit. Its message is there and the world is in a state of confusion. Loved it! 10 Karin Anderson
What if God did not exist - would the atheists live in bliss? Regardless if one is a believer or not - this is a very poignant poem & a wonderful, thoughtful way to start the day. Thank you Alf. 10/10 : -)
Man is unfortunately hanging himself and all get drawn in - greed and hate replace giving and love but how to stop this downward trend other than by divine intervention - if only your poem can be written across the sky
A timely, reflective piece. Well written and pleasant to read
Alf, I also see the greed that rules our world, but unlike you I have no faith in prophets of doom. I am not an Atheist, I believe that the life force or spirit in us is shared by all of us. We need to learn how to love each other, to share, we do not need the punishment of a God. We just need to know the hurt we cause to humankind. We have been punishing people who go wrong for years, yet we still have to continue to punish. A well written poem, you are a great poet. regards Bob
I agree! Man has turned from God- the world now is either foolishly atheistic, or ignorantly worshipping false gods like Buddah. Very well put, and full of truth.
Alf, As I began to read this I immediately said to myself 'But we Do' and there you go saying so at the end. I agree myfriend. nice write well said. Susan I saw that you had several other NEW writes, I will try to get to those in the next few days Alf, I always enjoy your work. Susan
a very interesting poem..the mysticism of this world within still a guess and its up to God judgement....nice write....10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Penned in your usual brilliant style....Much food for thought here my friend....keep expressing Alf...you're a natural