What A Painful Parting Poem by William Mpina

What A Painful Parting

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What a painful parting
After hours and hours of waiting
Followed by hours and hours of hearing
Unrefined songs from minibus touts
Catalyzed by ethanol satchets
Seasoned with 'chingambwe' smoke
Finally, the minibus kicks on
'Farewell boy, say hello to Roy.'
Says a smiling aunt to me
I fork out my arm
Down the road
People, houses, trees whiz past
Vruuuu! beeeeep!
Darkness, darkness at noon
'Farewell soul. say hello to Jesus.'
Says my body
So painful and uncompromising
What a painful parting!


NOTE: chingambwe is a chichewa(local language) word for raw tobacco.

Friday, July 24, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 27 July 2015

Lovely narrative poem, depicting painful separation of a doting aunty and a well loved nephew. A well articulated piece of poetry nicely penned from the heart. A good one indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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