Water Cycle Poem by Elizabeth Shield

Water Cycle



Raindrops pool in azure skies
Yellow boots now flying through
Sparkling drops lift off, take flight
To come to rest on emerald leaves
And view the rising of the night
Glowing in the setting sun
Breeze bobbing them like fireflies
They slither down to dot the pane
And at a glance appears like rain
But with dawns first kiss, its trail is clear
First winters frost has now been here
He leaves a snaking snowflake web
Across the cold clear glass

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 14 November 2015

Your Poem about the Water Cycle was very good and easy to read. I thought it was going to be about Ecclesiastes 1: verses 6 & 7 and then verse 9 bemoans the monotony of it all. There was no monotony in you poem I enjoyed it. Read mine - Frost Flowers - Adeline

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