Was She The One? ! Poem by HaZeM PaKKaR

Was She The One? !



i
am
so
happy
that
i
met
her,
but
i
still
don't
have
an
answer
for
this
quistion:

was SHE the ONE who made my heart smoking in my chest? !
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*** your comments will be a fortune to me, thanks truly ***

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 06 August 2009

such a fine question and ending...was she the one? lovely....Thanks....

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Merna Ibrahim 31 July 2009

Good piece too..You write you poems in a short but a good way! ! ...but you can write longer i am sure....great..well written! ! Merna

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Christina Phan 30 July 2009

great piece kept writing 7++

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Miriam Maia Padua 30 July 2009

cute...i love the thoughts... unique in style.. amusing and sweet... 10/10 lovelots, Maia

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