War - 08 (Haiku) Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

War - 08 (Haiku)

Rating: 4.9


War is a volcano of lust

That erupts into gardens of Loving hearts

Spreading ashes of hatred.

Tuesday, August 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: war,war and peace,war memories,warfare
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anamika Raj 27 August 2017

A good poem. Nice use of imagery.10+

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Sanjukta Sahoo 27 August 2017

War is a volcano of lust That erupts into gardens of Loving hearts Spreading ashes of hatred. War is a destructive volcano spitting fiery dust of hatred. Nice.10++.

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Sabita Sahoo 23 August 2017

War is a volcano of lust That erupts into gardens of Loving hearts Spreading ashes of hatred. Yes poet, war is like a burning lava that would burn everything green. 10 for the nice haiku.

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Rajendra Rout 09 November 2017

War is a volcano of lust That erupts into gardens of Loving hearts Spreading ashes of hatred. War spreads ashes of hatred from past to future.lovely poem shairing i agree with you

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Anita Aparajita Das 23 August 2017

War is a volcano of lust That erupts into gardens of Loving hearts Spreading ashes of hatred. War spreads ashes of hatred from past to future... Best haiku.Thanks.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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