Walking In Jerusalem Poem by nidal habash

Walking In Jerusalem

Rating: 5.0


Walking the Roman Roads
Darkened mist uniting the young and old

A scared silence with an eerie wind
A Yamaka embracing a dagger and the story is yet to unfold

I heard the screams, thuds and booms
Shadows melting as cousins bleed in an entwining stream

I felt ambivalent without a care
As I walked between bodies laid in despair
.....We all been here before.

So I walked to the Golden Dome
To a sight of a man picking his own thorns

He stopped me to declare
I am a Christian, Muslim and a Jew
I came to see if the stories I heard are true

I thought the scriptures are crystal clear
Don't kill your brothers and sisters
Cherish the earth and sun with what you hold dear

But all I have seen is hatred and fear
The Earth in Mourning and the sun is a shadow of her peers

I stopped the wise stranger
But could not fight back the bitter tears

Who are you I asked?
A thunderous cloud declares. He is Isa the messiah and his second coming is near.

Tuesday, October 20, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: conflict,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 20 October 2015

Excellent poem of shinning truth All belligerents should read

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Nidal Habash 20 October 2015

Thank you...people need to look past their religious heritage and start looking at each other as humans.. the world will be a better place for it.

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Manonton Dalan 07 November 2015

history coming back...great

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Chinedu Dike 03 November 2015

Lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and elegantly penned in poetic diction with spiritual insight. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Souren Mondal 20 October 2015

A very well written poem that depicts the 'evils' of our present day, but ends with hope.. Indeed we still have or at least should strive to have hope in your hearts for things to change....

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Nidal Habash 22 October 2015

thank you for your kind words...Evil can be conquered with hope.. and would like to see more of it

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Fabrizio Frosini 20 October 2015

'' I thought the scriptures are crystal clear Don't kill your brothers and sisters Cherish the earth and sun with what you hold dear But all I have seen is hatred and fear The Earth in Mourning and the sun is a shadow of her peers'' yes.. and what we see is hatred and fear growing day after day.. Thank you, Nidal. Welcome at P.H. and keep on writing Blessings Fabrizio

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Nidal Habash 20 October 2015

Thank you for your kind words...Troubled world we are in... Hope cooler heads prevail..

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Kelly Kurt 20 October 2015

Scary stuff, Nidal. Well written. Thanks

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Nidal Habash 20 October 2015

Thank you for your feed back.. we do live in a troubled world..

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