Walk Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Walk

Rating: 5.0


Lets walk through this day
Clutching the remnants of hope
Our eyes still shimmer with dreams
Our hands still move to glean
treasures from the rubble
Let's walk through this day
Holding on to the bits and pieces
That will build tomorrow.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 13 February 2023

So beautiful that after I read it, Iwept

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Nosheen Irfan 14 February 2023

I hope you will smile and laugh every day.

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Khairul Ahsan 13 February 2023

So wonderful Nosheen! An appropriate poem on the eve of the Valentine's.

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Nosheen Irfan 14 February 2023

Thanks sir. Good to see you here after a long time.

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David Wood 13 February 2023

Walk through the day with peace in your heart and goodwill to all.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 February 2023

Our eyes still shimmer with dreams.....you have conveyed enough to the readers' community through this optimistic expression! An impactful poem of great value and substance! Stay always happy and blessed dear poetess Nosheen!

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M.J. Lemon 17 February 2023

Hopes and dreams can topple the rubble and ruins that life (perhaps its grind?) builds. Magnificent verse, Nosheen.

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Made a revisit to this poem. This new poem of Nosheen is already at #83 in the Best Member Poems. I wish that this poem is among the top of the list.

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 14 February 2023

beautiful poem penned; lovely to read

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Anjandev Roy 14 February 2023

That will build tomorrow.... significant..

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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