Veiled Lament Poem by Bert Bell

Veiled Lament

Rating: 5.0


as frail as a wishbone, she
sits at the table by the window,
sipping her sherry in a haze

of blue sadness, waiting for
him to walk through the door
as he always does after

a long day at the office he
hates so much. she plays with
a strand of hair, and casts

her eyes on the place-setting
she has laid out for his
dinner. she brushes away

a tear, and leans on her
elbows, cradling her chin
in an open palm, almost

smiling, perhaps at a memory
of him, who she now accepts
she will never see again.


Bert Bell 2016

Monday, May 23, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: human condition
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 09 June 2020

Well articulated and nicely brought forth in persuasive expressions with conviction. A sad story of love nicely put together.

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Roseann Shawiak 07 June 2016

Poignantly heartfelt, loneliness falls like a blanket upon the mind while reading this poem, the sorrow of loss seeps into the picture you have painted through your poem, a lasting image is seen now. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Kelly Kurt 24 May 2016

Very well written. A vignette of loneliness and sorrow

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Ratnakar Mandlik 23 May 2016

A beautifully crafted very touching poem highlighting the deep sorrow after losing a near and dear one that accompanies one through out life. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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