Vanished Love Poem by Vikram Aarella - The Poem Shooter

Vanished Love



My dreams are shattered
My hopes are diminished
My heart has been battered
And love has vanished.

My soul is scattered
My happiness is finished
For none it mattered
If I lived or was banished

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33, Ansari
30/7/09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

....Search for the misplaced as it is not lost.Find solace in the pursuit of the much treasured.Good poem catching the eyes and obviously the mind...

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Shirley Woods 06 August 2009

Good poem - full of feelings of hurt. Well written.

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Obinna Eruchie 04 August 2009

Well written piece about being shattered by love.

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Ted M 31 July 2009

When smitten with love, this is all you can feel or think about and without this there's no driver. well written.

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Jay P. Narain 30 July 2009

Nice rhythmic poem. You will rise like a phoenix!

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