Vampires Poem by Rini Shibu

Vampires

Rating: 4.4


Never turn back
And  look at your sides
Many are there like vampires
You have to move forward
saying goodbye
Though everything is looted
and nothing  in the hand
You have to live with a smile
Nobody is left to wipe your tears
No one is here as your own
In this journey you are left alone
There are bumps and gutters on the way
But you have learned to hop from mistakes
So move on as you can't stay

Wednesday, January 31, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: people
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muzahidul Reza 01 February 2018

Many are there like vampires You have to move forward, yes, we must overcome all that disfavors, .............. thanks for sharing the poem with us, +++++++++++++++++++++++ 10

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Rini Shibu 01 February 2018

Thanks Reza! !

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Akhtar Jawad 01 February 2018

Though everything is looted and nothing in the hand You have to live with a smile...Beautiful thoughts, wish you always smile.

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Rini Shibu 01 February 2018

Thank you so much Akhtarji for your good wishes

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 January 2018

Well written Rini, Loved reading it........10

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Rini Shibu 01 February 2018

Thanks Dillip! ! !

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Lamar Cole 31 January 2018

This is a very thought invoking poem about vampires.

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Rini Shibu 31 January 2018

Thanks Lamar for posting your comment! ! Rini

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Judith Blatherwick 31 January 2018

Good message Rini. Life is about learning, taking the good with us and walking away from the bad.

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Rini Shibu 31 January 2018

Thanks Judy for your lovely comment Rini

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