Us Poem by Kristina Fleissner

Us

Rating: 4.5


You could curse at me
You could hit me
But that wont change
The way I feel about you
I hate you with a passion
For the pain that I have caused us
I lie
I cheat
I steal
But yet I am not allowed to feel
I want to cry with out you saying a word
I want to scar with out you saying a word
I want to feel with out you saying a word
I want you to not say a word
What is the promble with us?
It is me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jon Lloyd 16 November 2005

Nice work (but don't put yourself down!) Look forward to reading more of your stuff. PS - small typo on penultimate line. Jon

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