Untitled 54 Poem by Andy Brookes

Untitled 54

Rating: 5.0


what is the architecture of a life?
not the bricks and mortar of cells,
branches of arteries and veins, brain, sinew, muscle, bone

it's not about who made you the act but a short pleasure.
the big bang with which every life begins, a selfish gene machine.
It is what you become life's experiences forming and structuring
like old houses a added to a hodgepodge of styles.


I am grateful to the sperm donor; to the warm wet incubator that nurtured me,
until the time I made my first appearance.

birth it is the only time you hold centre stage,
the star. Except, of course, in death

though there were no loving arms, gentle words, crooning lullabies.
having made me, the two principles left, exit stage right.

they sadly could not stick around, to mess me up or be of any influence,
they left that to others, yet they are always spectres at my feast.
family and not, just faces in faded photographs.

Saturday, October 13, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 13 October 2018

It is what you become life's experiences forming and structuring like old houses a added to a hodgepodge of styles. so touching and true. This poem is really a beautiful poem on life and death where the penmanship is so nice ans interesting. Thanks you dear Andy for sharing this gem with us. Full vote.10

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