Untitled Poem by Shivangi Mariam

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I see the sun setting between my legs,
its warmth descending
into the lips of the night.
The language of love-
and such have been her demands-
commands separation.
And so the lips part.
In a tight, calculated contraction.
My tiny lips part to swallow the sun.
The mouth is open wide
and inside,
the sun tastes the shadows
it cursed the day with.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fabrizio Frosini 12 October 2016

both poems - your first 2 here - are very good ones. Thanks for sharing and keep on posting..

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Shivangi Mariam 12 October 2016

Thank you, Mr. Frosini! Your words are kind. There is no poem worth a martyr, a madman said once. And I add, there is no poem like mother's fingers which knead the daily bread, no words like the stars extinguishing in oblivion as the moon continues to shine...

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Brother Sadeeq 12 October 2016

Nice one . i think a title will do good, for this one.

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Shivangi Mariam 12 October 2016

Thank you for reading my words. I would be interested in knowing what title you would suggest. This poem came to me many nights back, with moon stinging my fingers, I wrote...

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