Unknowing Soldier Poem by Fleance Candide

Unknowing Soldier

Rating: 4.0


As mountains gloom and winter bites
A hardened man
Trudges the scarlet-crossed fields
Of an oriental desert -

Toxins of the mind
Bloom
As white flesh withers
Under summer fire.

One day,
A hardened man
Has had enough.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Oconnell 28 February 2010

hello and thanks. read some of your poems. enjoyed language and something bordering on the mystique, i think. a 10 for this one though i hate this rating business. john o'connell

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