Under Your Spell Poem by Practicing Poetess

Under Your Spell



You had me under your spell.
Oh, well.
The spell is over now.
My eyes are opened;
I can tell
You're not the man for whom I fell.

You charmed me, that is true.
Oh, you!
But now I see the light.
Not blind in love,
I see right through
Misleading things you used to do.

Saturday, May 12, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: awakening,spells,truth
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aqua Flower 13 May 2018

The Love spell is hard to break. But the truth always comes through! Our eyes and mind open what the heart does not want to believe! Nicely presented!

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Thanks, Rainbow! Sometimes I think our idealism, hopes & dreams can blind us to 'red flags' along the way. But sooner or later, our protective mechanism kicks in, and sound reason prevails! Thank you for your insights, and the compliment!

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 May 2018

My eyes are opened! ! ! Now! Overcoming the odds. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Thank you, Edward Kofi, for reading and commenting!

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Rini Shibu 12 May 2018

Life is meaningful when we are able to differentiate right and wrong..good one

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Thank you, Rini. Hope you are doing well!

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Marissa Oakley Browne 12 May 2018

Nice poem - I know what you mean! Hindsight provides great insight :)

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If not for hindsight, where would some of us be? : D Thank you for commenting, Marissa!

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