Under Kafka's Eyes Poem by Lee Ann Schaffer

Under Kafka's Eyes

Rating: 3.7


Bound in lace,
First snow,
Nothing to offer
But that destined to
Bring rejection.
His ravenous gaze,
Fearing satisfaction.
Both ends of
The magnet.
To clutch, to discard;
Construct, destroy;
Repulsion
Pulsing pink,
Rising and roiling
Red waters
His sin swept soul
Revels before revulsion.
She walks home
Cold and alone
Trailing detritus.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Max Reif 21 August 2005

You have strong images-'red waters' is very ominous. and the emotional closure of your poem is so powerful. A couple things were ambiguous for me on two quick readings-'fearing satisfaction', for example.

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Lee Ann Schaffer

Lee Ann Schaffer

Charleston, South Carolina, US
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