Turn It Around Poem by Practicing Poetess

Turn It Around

Rating: 5.0


You didn't get to select your parents
Or choose your circumstances
Perhaps Life dealt you a bad hand
Or you had more than your share of pain

You may have added to the problem
By your reactions to the unfairness
By acting out, in self-destruction,
You failed the sought relief to gain.

But you can yet rise from the ashes
And overcome, and finish strong,
And do good with the life you're given
And not perpetuate the wrong.

You have more say-so than you think
A victim or a victor to be
Your past is not your future,
You're free to choose your destiny.

Saturday, September 29, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: future,past
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Believe it or not (and to inject a bit of humour) , this poem was partly inspired by a shirt company's screen-printed teeshirt, which read,'My Parents Said I Could Be Anything I Wanted To Be, So I'm A Bum' ! ! !
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Laurie Van Der Hart 19 October 2018

I like the message of this poem, Poetess. A good one to remember when inclined to sink into Poor me! mode. Been enjoying reading some of your poems after a long time.

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Practicing Poetess 23 October 2018

Thank you, dear Laurie! A pleasant surprise to hear from you! I value your opinion.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 October 2018

Problems come in life but we have to face as these do not last for long time. Yes, you can rise from ashes. Only positive vision, thought and action are required. A nice poem is beautifully penned with enthusiasm and hope. An excellent poem is shared...10

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Practicing Poetess 04 October 2018

Thank you, Kumarmani, for your (always) cherished feedback and spot-on assessments. They are appreciated! :)

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Kostas Lagos 30 September 2018

Turn life around. A difficult task to be done. Well written poem!

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Practicing Poetess 30 September 2018

Thank you, Kostas, for your appreciation. Difficult, but not impossible, right? Determination gets the difficult done ! :)

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 September 2018

Such a heartwarming poem...10++++++++++

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Practicing Poetess 30 September 2018

Thank you, Bernard, for reading & rating! :)

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louis rams 29 September 2018

I turned it around once I got up off the ground, now my life has settled down, and in you a friend I found.

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Practicing Poetess 29 September 2018

Thank you, Louis, for your reply in perfect rhyme, which fits this poem just fine! I appreciate your comment! It's much prettier to view the sky, than staring at the ground all the time! :)

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