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Truelove

This feeling is real
No amount of dreams can compare to such a romantic revelation
At last I shall not commit a crime of passion
Arrest me if I'm wrong
For I see in you the beauty that is not only attractive but rare
Wow
A moment of silence makes me think about the future
Logic and reason
What does it all mean?
In time we will know together
The mind is indeed an intelligent universe
Wrapped in an intriguing spell
My greatest obsession still lingers on
Erotic fairy tales with a brilliant happily ever after
Sex is a powerful stimulation of the arts
Especially if one could master it
To fall in love is to fall in love wholeheartedly
With bodies in motion
It's quite impossible to resist further temptation
There's nothing more thrilling than those sleepless nights
Hearts racing like wild horses
Hot and heavy breathing
I must admit my pulse is about to burst.

Submitted: Saturday, October 05, 2013
Edited: Friday, March 21, 2014


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  • Khairul Ahsan (11/20/2013 1:07:00 AM)

    One can write the like of a 'True Love' only when one is truly in love. Bravo, well done!
    'At last I shall not commit a crime of passion
    Arrest me if I'm wrong
    For I see in you the beauty that is not only attractive but rare'...Love opens our eyes to see such beauty, sharpens our mind to feel it and prepares our body to respond to the ravishing love in kind.

    'In time we will know together
    The mind is indeed an intelligent universe
    Wrapped in an intriguing spell'
    True. The stream of love springs forth from 'psyche', the mind. Sex without love is lust, just a 'release syndrome', whereas sex mingled with love is heavenly pleasure, like fairy tale happiness, just as you said:
    'Erotic fairy tales with a brilliant happily ever after
    Sex is a powerful stimulation of the arts
    Especially if one could master it'.

    'It's quite impossible to resist further temptation
    There's nothing more thrilling than those sleepless nights
    Hearts racing like wild horses
    Hot and heavy breathing
    I must admit my pulse is about to burst.'
    With these emotions, you might arrest the pulse of quite a few... :)
    Well written, dear poet!

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  • Gary Kedron (10/6/2013 9:32:00 PM)

    yes you captured the feeling..... I'm laughing to myself mine are all bitter..... great expression in your poetry! !

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